"Unforgotten" has been rewritten from the ground up, sticking closely to the original plans for the story. At 3.2k words, it's the longest chapter I've ever written for any story.

The next chapter is yet to be rewritten, so the old, plot-twisted version will remain up in the meantime. ^_^

Plot-Twisted "Corrupted Twilight" chapters will be reposted under the upcoming story "Pony-Me: Rogue".

Now that I have a better sense of direction for the story, I don't quite see as much of a point anymore in writing filler chapters that'd supply information which is gonna be provided by upcoming chapters.

Now that the timeline of Pony-Me has been split in two, I can continue on with the original plot in the main story, while keeping the AU separate in the second story for those who would like to see it expanded upon.

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This directly replaces the scene in the original chapter where Lisa, Samantha, and Timothy arrive at the old office building. In contrast to that chapter, where Twilight is playing the part of Lisa, this chapter instead has Lisa herself, free from any and all influence from Twilight. As such, her personality from before the simulation shines through for the very first time in the story.

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The rewrite of chapter "Unforgotten" is currently standing at roughly 2,600 words and counting, and I still don't consider it finished. This was originally supposed to be one of the final chapters of Part 2, providing plenty of new information to the readers to ease them into new conflicts in Part 3.

And I guess avoiding straight-up infodumping and instead writing it all into the story arc is just gonna balloon the chapter into the longest one yet in the Pony-Me universe.

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